Further feedback

Today at Colleridge we received some more feedback concerning our music video. After the effect explained in the previous post, this made the narrative a lot clearer and easier to understand. Our feedback from pete was as follows:

- The new overlapping effect works well with the narrative, it makes it a lot clearer and easier to understand, it also blends better with the music video.

- The narrative needs more fades to make it more smooth, as the footage is a bit choppy at the moment. 

- We should do more of the overlap effect on more of the shots in the video, especially where the shots are held longer as this will create a better effect and make the video look  better.

- One piece of footage needs to be stronger and the most prominent so that the audience know where to focus while watching the video.

Pete believed with these improvements the video will be almost ready and finished, which is excellent as we have plenty of time. I think the video works a lot better now with the overlapping effect too, and I am proud of all the effort we have put in for the video.